It sounded like a bug minding its own business chirping at first. Then the tempo got faster then faster! All of a sudden the more of these abrupt sounds got added to it. it seemed as if they just kept on adding things to the sound. It sounded like tree's all lined in a row and the wind pushes them harder and harder forcing them to hit each other and make that rustling sound. It also sounds like theres no care in the world because it kind of has that i don't care feeling. there's a faint sound in the background. Then you start hearing almost frog noises, kind of like gra, gra... gra gra...this time it changes again. Now it sounds like the sound where you put i disk into your computer, like a erhh... erh... erhhh. With the first sound still playing, it's almost as if the sound is broken with different pitches, random sounds, and a whole bunch of stuff jumbled together. Its almost unpleasant. Then the sound starts to dim like a sunset thats about to leave. It creeps down as the sound clearly ends.
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The usage of punctuation is interesting. Some of it breaks up sentences, to create build up. It's a great way to write because the reader always wants to to what is coming next.
Once I listened to your "sound" I noticed just how well your description fit in. The sound itself wasn't at all like any thing I was expecting. I enjoyed how you noted the changes going on.
I think you could have written more about how sharp this sound is, it wasn't ever really mentioned. Instead of just saying something like "frog noises" you can say "electronic frog noises" because then the reader would understand that all these sounds are digital.
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